All Comments on 'Learning the Blues Ch. 01'

But it was too short; it would have been better to have stopped further along in the story.

Good start but extremely short.

Oh why so short? There were so many things that caught my interest, I'm already hooked...please continue soon

It is a good story so far, but I do agree with the other commenters, that it was just getting started when it finished. I guess you have a reason for that. I would like to see more of this wonderful story and how you evolve it into a good romance.

ACLASSYLADY

Hiya folks. Thanks for the good feedback. :) I'm used to a different site where authors typically upload in 1k word chunks. I'll adjust that with my next submission.