All Comments on 'Learning the Ropes Ch. 02'

Well written and amazing. The sex scene was amazing cause of the emotions you put into it. I hope they both are able to find happiness even if it's not with each other. I think mark should be honest with his girlfriend as soon as possible

I would like to see Mark and Will become a couple. I wonder what Wills father would think then

Lol.

great chapter. you really make the emotions and sensual experience come through. You can feel something more forming between them. i hope you continue the story.

I didn't comment on Ch 1 but it was a good start and Ch 2 is great. Your writing is excellent and the sex, once we got to it, was really HOT. Loved it. Look forward to Ch 3.

Hello, faithful readers:

I appreciate your taking the time to write your thoughts. Seems the scene here didn't disappoint. I'm always hesitant to post a chapter without any action--this is an erotica site, after all--but I felt the first chapter was necessary to provide some context. In the second, all that bottled up emotion and uncertainty, well, goes somewhere. Everywhere.

Ch 3 will explore more of the relationship between the protagonist and his parents, as well as featuring some more weekend fun... If there's anything in particular you'd like to see, let me know. While I can't make any promises, I can take anything into consideration.

P. Alinea

I can't wait for the next part ^.^ well I can wait but it's torture.. awesome work so far!!!

Hey Man! Are you leaving us without a third chapter!? It's a very good writing and the story stands. Please don't forget to find some time to keep us happy ;)

I would buy it. Reading this was like watching two souls meld together,forging something beautiful and more than the sum of it's parts. Beautiful man, hope u write more on this story.

nice coming together for this guys,, both at the same stage for figuring things out for themselves and then with each other. they have the love of good deep friendship perhaps not as a couple given his family, their age and such, but you can only but dream and be hopefull for them both

Sad that it seems that this will not get finished. Really wanted to know how it will work out between them.