All Comments on 'Learning the Rules Ch. 01'

What an interesting, intense beginning to what I hope will be a really good story.

wow

To a lovely story.

Hopefully we won't have to wait too long for the next chapter.

A nice gentle build up, leaving me wanting to know more.

Welcome and thank you.

5 stars.

A good start and I’m look forward to reading more from you. Well paced and an interesting read.

Maybe a couple of things that slewed my thinking, yet so minor that I’m sure the more I read what comes next, then perhaps I may be wrong.

Well done for the start to your first story.

Looking forward to the next chapter

do not take to long with the next part

I look forward to reading more...

The series get better as as it progresses. Chapter 1 whets your appetite. And things get better from there. The writing gets better and the excitement builds.

I like the contrast, the sweet and sour aspect to the women in the series. They are every man's dream.

Could also serve as BDSM 101 for a novice sub.

Hi. I just finished your Marine story and love it. Now, I'm starting this series. So far, I enjoyed chapter one. I can't wait to continue. Thanks for giving us such good stories. Sometimes the stories are good, sometimes I wonder how they got printed. Never do I wonder how yours will be. I know they will be great.

Excellent writing. I cannot wait to read more! .BAB

Very nice story! I enjoy the plot and character development. Nice work.

Okay...you have my attention...now let's continue!

Matt

I love how the characters are being developed in this introduction chapter. I feel like Alex must feel. I want to know more, and more.

Great writing!

I like the way you introduced the characters in this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I want to thank you for your sending me a reaction to my comments on another story. It feels good to know the writer actually pays attention to the comments. I have commented on several stories and most comments get no reaction.

Because of two reasons: first the sudden change from past to the present in the naration.

Second for the narration in the present. Ik gives the story a sense of breathless urgency that is not warranted for.

Still a nice set up for a story. 4*

I thought this was a great first chapter. Great character introduction and build up for chapter two. I can’t wait to see where this leads.