by Dirkstimson
Dirk, you're good at this! you ought to get more kudos after a little time goes by, but I was happy to learn you had more than one submission, and will watch for more. This entry was quite a turn-on; from a disgruntled victim of re-location, to a beautiful and sexy senorita, who could ask for more!
How refreshing to read something that can stimulate and yet possibly be as real as it was written! My compliments to the writer!!!
You write well, but I think you don't have much experience with women. The sex is boring, and you hardly describe her body.