All Comments on 'Learning to Dance'

stories I have read. Your writing is perfect, your descriptions of BDSM style is excellent, your words are well chosen and so very erotic. You must not stop this story here but take it to new heights in subsequent chapters.

Thank you for painting such an amazing picture. Please continue the storyline

I love how your stories focus on the elements that trigger an emotional response that are not dependent on physical perfection. the look in the eyes, the sound of the voice as opposed to an impossible standard of beauty.

There are many redemption tales, where one lost returns and becomes part of the fold again. This is one of those. Truly too short to cover the real redemption in depth, there is enough content to keep the imagination strong, the images clean and precise and the ambiance filling my senses with the sacrifice and the redemption price culminating in a passionate release of ecstasy.

You go girl

this story speaks to the submissive in me who has spent years searching and has finally found her Master...