All Comments on 'Learning to Forgetting to Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wrong Name

Good story other than the fact that you changed the other girl's name half way through your story. You started of with Sally and ended up with Sarah.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Sally/Sarah decide which and stick to it! Also you need some distinction between memory and present, maybe italics or something, one second we're in the present then out of the blue it's the past.

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
Great Read****

Thanks for sharing this very entertaining story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
is there a part 2

I am confused, this says chapter 1, but you posted it twice.

is there meant to be a part 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A good start

But where is chapter two and why were we blessed with 2 identical chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fun read, nice pace. Cries, positively cries I say, for another chapter or two. Don't forget to bring the wife back, expecting to be welcomed with open arms only to find......

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