All Comments on 'Learning to Let Go Pt. 03'

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IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years ago
"I need to go to the ladies and sort myself out."

I feel very lucky, while reading this story, that I'm from the States and they're so enjoyably British. There's something about this line that's simultaneously so natural and yet so unusually flavorful to American ears. It takes all the sexiness of the scene and adds this delightfully sculpted dollop of whipped cream on top of everything else.

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I came on here a few years ago, interested in erotic stories, made some friends who encouraged me to write... and the next thing I'm posting stories myself. If anyone wishes to comment on my writing - absolutely thank you for the feedback either way (so long as you have read ...

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