by mountainbikeman
ITS ONE OF MOST EROTIC STORIES I RED RECINTLY ,PLEASE WRITE PART 2 I KNOW THERE IS ONE,
THANK YOU ,KEEP GOING
That is a great story. I hope that Mom and Aunt Laura get a good view of him cumming. They should make a major show out of it. If his girlfreind can be brought in, that's fine. What is really needed is for him to openly admitt how much he jerks off in front of everyone and then tell him that he needs to show everyone how he does it. That way we will all see the ejaculation. He might even jack off every night for his audience.
Story was great, lots of passion, can't wait for you to write the next part! :-)
Perfect. Just perfect. One of the most erotic (in the true meaning of the word) stories I've read. And so perfectly slo-o-o-o-o-o-w.
PS: I take it for granted that you don't pay any attention to the stupid suggestions on how the story should develop.
The slow build-up and pacing in the story was fantastic and the loving consensualness really made it special. Well done!
That was a great story! It wasn't just the quick fucking like some others. It was slow and thoughtful and really gave a great background. kudos!
Totally engrossing, My expectations were surpassed beyond everything i had hoped. I've always had a voyeur streak in me so this hits right up my alley. I can't wait for Ch.2
I wiil tell you how much I liked this story. I started reading it, got hard very quickly. I stroked my cock as I read each word, getting more turned on with each sentance. Your explanation of the interaction of the three characters virtually jumped off the page. I intend to finish myself off just playing that story back in my mind. I expcet to have a fabulous orgasm after experiencing your story. The best writing I have encountered on Literotica and I have been reading these stories for 5+ years. Thanks
I adored the almost campy, yet undeniably sexy, dialogue! Also appreciated the use of "vagina" and "penis," as their slang terms get tiresome. Thank you for a great story!
Aunt and mother is the best combo for a three way. An interested nephew couldn't ask for more.
Such a beautiful beginning when auntie knew he was awake.