All Comments on 'Learning to Ride a Bike'

Areolas not auroras.

Tense changes mid sentence sometimes.

Story was pretty good.

it was a damn good tale - thanks!

Most likly never gonna ride nude, to many people in So. Cal.

I ddid drop my trunks and grab my wifes top at the river, and we walked nervously back to camp. Its not easy to fuck on a air mattress, so on the floor it was.

it brought back memories. Thanks!

I kept waiting for the Sheriff's Deputy to be parked just off the entrance road or down behind their truck. What kind of eyeful would he (or she) gotten? Who would have been the first to have an orgasm? I'm betting SHE would have...

But was it a Strava segment?

(Sorry - cycling joke.)

Tx

The story/writing may not be perfect BUT a bloody great little story. Thanks. Definitely worth FIVE.

Lowkeyone.