All Comments on 'Leaving Hope'

by MrPezman

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ariesgirlariesgirlalmost 11 years ago

I don't know which ending I like better, both are good.

dliterdliteralmost 11 years ago
endings

I liked the story very much and I liked both endings as well, but, I preferred the first ending much more than the alternative ending. Keep writing sci-fi very good flow.

jpb531jpb531almost 11 years ago
Nice story

Enjoyed it a lot. Neat to see how you skirted the edge of the uncanny valley. I personally preferred the first ending, but would have been happy with the story of the alternate had been the only one you gave.

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaalmost 11 years ago
Good story

But liked the first ending the best...

Hethen129Hethen129over 10 years ago
Wow

Between This and Dark Run I am going to have to rethink my stance on Android stories Nicely done

zetjester1zetjester1almost 9 years ago
Beautiful Story

Most excellent, really touching...Thank you so much

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
An Excellent Sci-Fi Story

An excellent well written Sci-Fi story with an excellent story plot and excellent character development. I liked the original ending much better than the alternate ending where they both kill themselves. The only thing I disagree with is him killing himself with the resupply ship being only 24hrs late when he did. I would have thought he would have waited at least 72-96hrs before he would have given up hope and did what he did. Besides, I like happy endings over sad endings. Retired Arm

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