All Comments on 'Leaving Present'

by Risktaker48

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

I enjoyed every word. A great story line. Well developed

bluerosemarybluerosemaryover 11 years ago
exciting!!

It's simply sexciting!!with little imagination you can feel your right there at that very moment...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fucking crap

You have no idea how to end a story but would make a good pick teaser for your bum boy

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I've finally started finishing some new stories (too many plot lines in my head), hopefully I will start completing more soon. Most of my writing is fantasy stories at the moment some are based on my own experiences. You dear reader will have to work out which! Thanks in advan...