by Jena121
The best story you have written and well deserves maximum points J.
Not quite boring enough to be a "00" but boring, nevertheless. You could have used Jack's wife a little more, and introduced Jack's lack of a condom when he was fucking Emma, as if to possibly hint at a possible pregnancy.
I thought your story line was very well planned out,almost as if you were recalling a time in the past.I enjoyed reading your post very much,It was like a trip down memory lane. Thanks for your good post.
Dont' know how you do it babe but it keeps getting better and better. Horny Old Bill
Excellently written. I love that you can tell a good story as well as technically write it well.