by MarshallStaxxx
Your powers of description are well-developed. There were some minor spelling errors, but they didn't detract from the eroticism of the story. Well done!
Really enjoyed this one. The level of detail in the sex scenes was great. I'm always a big fan of lots of messy body fluids. Like to see you tackle a more drawn out seduction. Not a complaint about this story, just a thought for future fun