All Comments on 'Lefone's Quest Ch. 01-03'

What a wonderful beginning to a story! Brilliant writing! I already feel like I know the characters from the way you write. I can't wait for the next chapters following. The only thing I can suggest if I may? Longer chapters. When a story is as good as this one, the reader doesn't want it to end after only one page. It leaves us frustrated, hahaha. But seriously...other than that, I think so far it's PERFECT!

....do keep it coming

You've set us up for an interesting story- where is it?

don't hanging. please finish the rest of the story.

A good promising start..... Sorry to see there is no update! I love the feel of this romance!

Thank you for so many lovely comments - I promise that an update will be on it's way!

PLEASE write the next installment!! It's been a damned year!