All Comments on 'Left Behind Ch. 02'

The first chapter just flowed out. This second chapter took a bit longer. The third and final chapter is underway, about 3/5 done now. A little more patience, please!

LEFT BEHIND was inspired by a couple of Italian films of the 1970s, not the Xian fantasy series. Sorry, I don't recall the name, but my memory is of a Roman housewife left behind by her family at an autostrada (expressway) food'n'fuel stop (just as Rosa here is left at a diner). She buses to Venice to start a calm new life and find love. Rosa has rather more adventures, to make her story fit for horny LIT readers.

In chapter 1 her children got a brief mention. Is she not worried about them now?

I'm glad somebody noticed! Stay tuned for ch.03, which should post here within a week or so.

Its actually a boring story. But not bad. Try to write interesting

Story is not bad. You should try writing small stories in 2pages

later you can continue in series. That will help you in writing skills

Very well written. I’m enjoying myself