All Comments on 'Legacy: Family'

Excellent keep up the good work. Patiently await the next chapter.

You did it again . Anyone Reading this should go to the forum and add you name to best writer list .You deserve number 1 ......

Another five stars, more if I could.

at first it was going great, then he was fucking the devil in a tub in front of a window, next thing you know he's at Catalan doing a test. of sorts. but the transition between the two seems lost to me. it may just be me but I found it confusing.

That was a hell of a cliffhanger. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Previous comment or was right though. There probably could have been a scene break or something in between the hot tub and trial scene. I feel bad for even offering that criticism because your work truly is masterful.

SOB

Thank you for you kind words. Always comment and critique, that is the only way for me to grow as a writer. I have posted the next chapter. I hope you enjoy. Take care and keep the comments coming.

If I was Thomas I would find a new place to live. While the sex seems great, I would think he would do fine anywhere. His family seems to spend what time they are not sleeping with him, hiding things from him, going behind his back or lying to him. While he didn't care about Eleanor sleeping with the cat, she thought he would but didn't care. Reminds me of what his mother did to who him thought was his father.

Fuck me dead , Saili6435 if you think your confused that makes two of us and I’m sure there’s more out there just like us. I’ve had to go back from time to time to re read parts of this story. But I’m sticking with it until the end…

Great chapter, super cliffhanger. You are a very talented author...

Awesome 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice but a lot of Sci-Fi 5 stars