by FINC
Haha!!! The bitch got what she deserved. Really good story. I'm not into humiliation much, but this sure was a lot of fun!
We need a part four so michella can get her revenge on the old lawyer fart and she wasn t a bitch . .
Let's see she's a low life gold digger ,and Thorne is a egocentrical ,petty ,vindictive asshole .The "poor" son who got a beautiful wife from daddies money was insane . There is not one person in this story that isn't a complete asshole .There is no high ground here .The lawyer wasn't just doing his job he went way beyond that to low life for even a lawyer .Any character with a name in this story is scum .
I totaly agree with the comments below. But im not sure what point your making other than you should always have good v evil to make a story complete? Did you mark it as 25% just because there is no moral highground?
i somehow knew how that was going to end...but it still pissed me off.