All Comments on 'Legs for Miles'

you lost me in the the first couple of lines into your so called story ~~ when she or he or whatever closed the door ~~ and I just stopped and found another story to read.!

Get some help { Editor } and start over with correct wording for your story.!**

TYVM

I got past the awkwardness of the first lines and found it hot and well-written. Gotta be careful from the git-go lest you scare off readers. There are too many stories and it is easy to move on if it doesn't engage immediately.

I liked your discription of the oral sex but you could expand more on the foreplay and the first penetration from the woman's point and what it felt like to have him cum deep inside her. All in all a good story