by susypeat
Your use of English is quite good. I am enjoying the story very much and looking forward to more. Thank you.
I absolutely liked both parts of ur story. Hope following parts will be alike and cant wait u publish them here.
Ur english seems fair to me, however I am also not native speaker.
Will check everyday for update...
Thank you again for all the feedback. Since my email is receive-only, I want to thank everybody who sent me feedback via mail this way.
For a non native speaker your writing is excellent. Some small mixups in the order of words but that just gives your characters authenticity.
Very nicely done. I just wish there had been some interaction with her tits and ass.
Maybe #2