All Comments on 'Leila - The First Level Ch. 02'

by susypeat

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jenniferh3jenniferh3over 10 years ago
Some feedback

Your use of English is quite good. I am enjoying the story very much and looking forward to more. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
my comment

I absolutely liked both parts of ur story. Hope following parts will be alike and cant wait u publish them here.

Ur english seems fair to me, however I am also not native speaker.

Will check everyday for update...

susypeatsusypeatover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the mails

Thank you again for all the feedback. Since my email is receive-only, I want to thank everybody who sent me feedback via mail this way.

OdieoneOdieonealmost 8 years ago
Fun hot story.

For a non native speaker your writing is excellent. Some small mixups in the order of words but that just gives your characters authenticity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I would not have known that you weren't a native English speaker

Very nicely done. I just wish there had been some interaction with her tits and ass.

Maybe #2

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