by Reier325
except for a few misspelled words I though it was a good story
i think i would have connected more if we had a bit more back story and understanding as to how you universe worked here. the lemony bit was great.....but to me the beginning was kind of like taking a slap to the face.
I found this erotic . Im not usually a cat person [ sorry ] at least i
Wasnt. I Am now .
Some back story would of been nice , yes. to help understand the world that includes cat people.
But still erotic and sexy fun. And its nice to read something a bit different.
This is a nice whimsical take on the shape-shifter theme and gently erotic. You could have gone for any animal but rightly chose cats---they are very sensuous creatures; watch a cat squirming and it's bordering on mild eroticism. I agree with sontoriginyu that the tale really needed some back story---how did Lena and Callie become were-cats? You mentioned 'infection' but took it no further. Perhaps you could use an explanation as a plot basis for your next story (there will be a next story I hope?).
Cute. Since others have suggested a back story would have been nice, I will not;) But what I will say is that it was an ok short story. I appreciate the creative effort the author put into it
A very enjoyable story. I really like the spread-by-infection shape-shifter stories. Nothing to do with the current pandemic, of course. Just an interesting sci-fi/fantasy concept.
I like it! It would have been nice to have some backstory but I thought it was really good! Please make more!