by Xchef
Try the fetish section next time this would probably be a ten for that readership
You're a retard and a fag and we all know it. gave this story a 5 to help offset your retarded score
Agree with others. Category was wrong. Non-consent, BDSM, Fetish, or Gay but not LW. Also needs lots of editing to improve grammar and general writing errors.
That said, Stuart should file assault charges (including sexual) against his wife and against the "Helping Dick." Divorce her while she's dealing with criminal charges and she won't get much in the settlement.
One might argue that Hubbie really liked the encounter and secretly craved the humiliation based on the ending. Yet nothing indicates he was enjoying a fantasy based on his attempt to avoid being urinated on, fucked in his ass, and several other acts described in the "story."
Kidnap victims sympathize with and even defend their captors after a while; that doesn't mean they really like what was done to them by force (it's called "Stockholm Syndrome"). And just because an individual climaxes during forced sex, it doesn't mean he/she enjoyed being raped.
5 and better than that if I could. Had me so hot. Stuart was trooper taking it in ass but he DID deserve it. Wonder how long before then got back together.
for effort and content and to say "eat shit" annony!!
I gave this story a 5 to be fair and help offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. The fag annony votes every LW story with a 12 He's fucking insane.
Again this fag fool give every LW story a 1 and thinks he is destroying the site! His wife left him and cheated on him and he is pissed off at all LW and women ,. He has turned gay!!
Gave you a to help your score and to offset the asshole's 1 voe
All three characters are not the kind of people I would want as friends or relatives. If knew of their proclivities would you set any of them up in a position of trust? I would not.
A gay bragging about being gay...The so-called "bull", after all was gay as any gay in the world...the husband was gay too, and the wife was there by mistake...So wrong category for this story...In gay category this could be a good story...In here is less than 1*
That is 10 minutes of my life I'll never get back
Plz don't write anymore. thx :-(
Thank you for reading. I appreciate all your comments. Especially the ones from members. I did inadvertently place this in the wrong category.
"In many ways, the work of a critic is easy. We risk very little yet enjoy a position over those who offer up their work and their selves to our judgment. We thrive on negative criticism, which is fun to write and to read. But the bitter truth critics must face is that, in the grand scheme of things, the average piece of junk is more meaningful than our criticism designating it so."
where the wife is fucked silly or even dominated by a man with a long thick dick with the initial or eventual consent and enjoyment of her husband. Oral, vaginal and anal sex are fine with me but licking and tonguing ass holes and men sucking each others dicks grosses me out. I know that these things turn some people on and that's ok with me, but it's not my cup of tea so that's why I'm rating this story 2*.
The focus was on the action not backstory well done story of one evènt says it all
I’m no lawyer (thank God) but I think some of the things that happened in this story may be illegal. Maybe even rape. Whatever the case, I didn’t find the story in any way entertaining.
I can think of two people who would be in the same shape as your "writing" career....dead.
It’s been said that God made men, and Col. Colt made them equal. Mayhaps Stuart should think about that, and once he understands it he can make a rational decision as to whether he wants to be brutalized and sodomized again by those two turds impersonating human beings.
1 star.