All Comments on 'Lending a Helping Hand'

by MitchCapslock

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60andhorny60andhornyabout 13 years ago
goos story

exciting...i need to bring my car there for some of those benefits

peterphunpeterphunabout 13 years ago
Great fun at the shop!

I need some body work done... RIGHT NOW!!! Great story... great build up to some great action... your story telling is vivid and intoxicating.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
poor

In paragraph two the author writes "...and your hoping...". It needs to be "...you're...". That's it, that's enough to make a person stop reading.

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