by broken1477
Another chapter to Audra's adventure has been submitted, stay tuned!
This is the most amazing bdsm/slavery erotic fantasy I ever read. Please dont let haters that say it is too unrealistic bothers you. Please dont change your style or suppress your creativity to comply to those haters. Please write more, I really look forward to it. Thank you again for this amazing work.
Another great chapter =)
I like your writing style quite a lot. Can't wait for the next part!
This is an amazing story. You are one of the view who understands that the erotic comes from the struggling of Audra. That her body betrays her against her will. And the idea that she is not allowed to make noise or move when coming is soooo hot. I hope you find the time to continue. This could be a long story. Thanks for writing
Thank you. This is my first foray into creative writing. I have received some criticism that it's too unrealistic. This is fantasy, after all.
Very hot, you have a strong command of the format and have your characters do what only a select few real humans would submit to