by MomsBrokenHalo
brilliant story ,love it. reading this was like i was watching this really taking place, you have a real great mind i for one would love another part of this kind of very hot horny story. very exciting to read and you really did make it sound as if it took place. so hey what about another of your super stories.
2275jr perfectly encapsulated my comments. I agree completely with his/her statement. Thanks for entertaining and sharing. Do write another tale soon won't you?
Oh God This Story Made Me Sooo Wet . Please Fuck Me Like That !! ;)
but the ending was ...um, it didn't make sense. There is absolutely no reason to ditch Angie... at least none that you share with the reader.
I thought that she would wind up telling Angie about the mistake and show her the tape and then they would plan to do it together later. Presto! instant 3 way.
Anyway, aside from the ending, the story was still hot.
You need to write more!!!!! Does she go after Patti again?
it was a nice idea that she went to the wrong home and met the wrong woman who turned out ro be the 100% right Lover. I bet Patti would want to meet her again after the rapist opend the door into a new world for her- 5 stars.
You must write more stories about Katrina. As you can see she has a strong following. I've read 1-2 please give me more.
I don't appreciate any story that glorifies rape. You do a disservice to every victim/survivor by presenting this as an exiting, enviable or even likeable subject. I'm sure most dudes that read it don't think much further than their balls & crow about how well written this is & what a great story you've written; a few women probably enjoy this stuff as well - misogyny is a prison & mindset of all sexes.
Well, I don't expect Shakespeare from a writer on Literotica but a conscience & something with more depth than a horny high school kid would be a good start.
The over-generalizations must stop. "Most dudes" approve of this or glorify this. Have you met all dudes or most dudes?
You do a disservice to the comment section.
I like to think of Patti touching herself thinking of that night for the rest of her life. Well done.