by akiss2desire
you have taken lesbian love to a new level, what a compelling and unbelieveably hot story!
I loved reading this story. It is one of the best I seen in a while. You should consider writing more of this story.
That was just lovely. Please, let us read more about these two ladies.
The last paragraph of this tale.... My Ex-Lady was a squirter. I can willing attest that there are ladies in the world that can in fact almost drown you if they're in the cowgirl position while receiving oral..... It's one of the thing I miss most about her.
You are my new favorite writer! You have such a way with words!! Love it
Clearly, one of the best seduction stories I have read. I was over the edge, multiple times, imagining what it looked like while reading their story!! Awesome, lovely and extremely sexy!! Tell more!!
Loved it - especially Marcia! Her youthful enthusiasm and need to go for it in the office was hot! I only gave 4 stars because Brenda was a bit controlling (deciding “this is the day” and then delaying…). That’s fine and sort of normal but when she said, "Marcia ...please make love to me with your mouth now” it took sexiness down a notch. It almost ticked back up to a 5 when Marcia would moan in response to Brenda’s own. Good work - worth reading!