by fitntrim
I have only chanced upon this story today and have read all four parts avidly. It is extremely well-written and very steamy indeed; although not exactly my type of thing, this is one of the best stories, of any genre, I have read here or elsewhere in a long time.
5 *s and my sincere thanks, fitntrim.
It has been well worth waiting six months for this new chapter. Excellent as always, thanks for a great read.
I'm glad you posted a new part finally. It's great as always. Please don't keep us waiting that long for the next part again. ;-)
I find their relationship more sweet an innocent, than dominant and submissive... (Already at the count of ten, I was panting, writhing, sweating, even whimpering a bit. I was feeling the pain). Really??
The story is getting more interesting!
I'm giving chapter 4, another 5-Stars..
Mistress Silva.
I agree with Mistress Silva on the innocence, but it is so endearing. At the same time, it carries lots of promises for future development ...
Five stars, no less