All Comments on 'Leslie Ch. 01'

by clintorres

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nicely done

Loved the word play between the two as the excitement between them grows to a passionate conclusion with their initial encounter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
beautiful

This is a wonderful love story, with a romantic aura about it that is truly remarkable. It deserves many more chapters.

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