All Comments on 'Leslie Takes a Ski Trip'

pretty amazing story, well done! I particularly enjoyed the female point of view - written from personal experience, I would presume! haha...

Great story!

..but take much more care with the writing skills, such as repeating names unnecessarily, hackneyed adjectives, continuity, break-offs etc.

...cause this one is so bad, I'm sure what would follow would be worse. "Men with big wallets or dicks "have the key" to the gate though. So, about the best that can be said to describe how Leslie felt at this moment is that she felt gloriously womanly. " What a complete load of crap. What really "hurt" was this story continuing to it's nauseating conclusion, never improving.