All Comments on 'Lesson Number One'

SO many mistakes...tenses messed up, sentences that make NO sense, homonyms used OUT of place....

IF you write again, give it to someone else to read before submitting it...PLEASE!!!

How much is Jace going to teach Emma????

This story is so much like my fantasies about my ex human biology teacher. He taught me sex Ed. ;)

Holy, i actually really enjoyed this story. I would love to actually read more about Jace's and Emma's adventures and all the things he's going to teach her.