All Comments on 'Lessons from Days Gone By Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Like the start needs more. What about the wrong number need more on it soon.

bigbob2406bigbob2406about 6 years ago

Great stuff.Hope there is a lot more to come about this couple.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Sexy couple

I know Laura said noting would come of this, but I want a description of Michael -- he's a graduated high school senior who played football -- when she strips off his shirt, give him just the beginning of some silky hair across the upper chest and maybe on his abs. A real sexy sight on a young man!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I enjoyed it

I liked this story a lot. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

I really enjoyed reading this. I hope there is a follow-up for the rest of the summer and when he gets to college.

happymuffinhappymuffinabout 6 years ago
I Liked this a lot

I really hope the mother gets in on it as well

The MouseThe Mouseabout 6 years ago
Excellent start!

Leaving aside my own inherent mild disbelief in a very rich woman falling for an 18-year old, I really enjoyed this story. Loved the slow build up, and find myself having to listen to Laura's admonition to "be patient".

That said, please hurry up with chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

That was one of the best stories here in a long time. Looking forward to part 2.

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
What a lovely story.

A young man's dream and the start of a beautiful summer of discovery.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Every man should experience this.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 6 years ago
A beautiful beginning!

And very yummy too! Thank you!

PtmcPilotPtmcPilotabout 6 years ago
"chapter 1"

Really enjoyed this story, and very happy to see it was titled "Ch. 01". I am so hoping for another installment!

mitchawamitchawaabout 6 years ago
well done

Patience is the correct word and for the readers too. Well written with a long drawn foreplay. Great dialogue and fun slow foreplay. an expansive vocabulary that enabled you to paint great word pictures. Waiting for chapter two.

SuccubusNightsSuccubusNightsabout 6 years ago
loved it

This has got to be one of the best stories ive read on here. Great use of language and not just a wham bam thank you mam sort of story. Keep it up i loved it.xox

RanDog025RanDog025about 6 years ago
I'D GIVE YOU 10 STARS IF I COULD!

I LOVED THIS STORY. SO WELL WRITTEN! YOU HAVE TO WRITE A PART 2 PLEASE. BEAUTIFUL STORY!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Magnificent!!!

I have just reread this in anticipation of reading Chapter 2! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A Solid Double to the Outfield.

Well done. Decent writing and believable characters with more wit than at first expected. Not the sexiest thing I ever read but a nice low-volt charge. Builds to climax.

B+ from the grey-bearded bench coach.

goducks111goducks111almost 5 years ago
wow - i don't know how i missed

this story - but i did!! glad i saw your new post. Love the tease. well-written, love these type of stories. brings back many memories and fantasies! 5 stars

GregH2662GregH2662over 4 years ago
Great Writing

Really enjoyed your story, can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderful and well written. Remindede of days eons ago when i was mowing yards

There wss a woman of class that i could never take my eyes off

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Lovely premise.

Well written.

Sex seems rushed though. For example, why didn't she handle and play with his cock and balls before the blowjob? Descriptions of her enjoyment as well as his would have been perfect, particularly if there had been dialog about what she was doing to him. And why didn't she ask him whether he'd masturbated to thoughts of her? How often? What did he fantasize about when he did?

Easitly could have been five stars, but not quite for me.

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