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Like the start needs more. What about the wrong number need more on it soon.
I know Laura said noting would come of this, but I want a description of Michael -- he's a graduated high school senior who played football -- when she strips off his shirt, give him just the beginning of some silky hair across the upper chest and maybe on his abs. A real sexy sight on a young man!
I really enjoyed reading this. I hope there is a follow-up for the rest of the summer and when he gets to college.
Leaving aside my own inherent mild disbelief in a very rich woman falling for an 18-year old, I really enjoyed this story. Loved the slow build up, and find myself having to listen to Laura's admonition to "be patient".
That said, please hurry up with chapter 2!
That was one of the best stories here in a long time. Looking forward to part 2.
A young man's dream and the start of a beautiful summer of discovery.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Every man should experience this.
Really enjoyed this story, and very happy to see it was titled "Ch. 01". I am so hoping for another installment!
Patience is the correct word and for the readers too. Well written with a long drawn foreplay. Great dialogue and fun slow foreplay. an expansive vocabulary that enabled you to paint great word pictures. Waiting for chapter two.
This has got to be one of the best stories ive read on here. Great use of language and not just a wham bam thank you mam sort of story. Keep it up i loved it.xox
I LOVED THIS STORY. SO WELL WRITTEN! YOU HAVE TO WRITE A PART 2 PLEASE. BEAUTIFUL STORY!
I have just reread this in anticipation of reading Chapter 2! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story!
Well done. Decent writing and believable characters with more wit than at first expected. Not the sexiest thing I ever read but a nice low-volt charge. Builds to climax.
B+ from the grey-bearded bench coach.
this story - but i did!! glad i saw your new post. Love the tease. well-written, love these type of stories. brings back many memories and fantasies! 5 stars
Really enjoyed your story, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Wonderful and well written. Remindede of days eons ago when i was mowing yards
There wss a woman of class that i could never take my eyes off
Lovely premise.
Well written.
Sex seems rushed though. For example, why didn't she handle and play with his cock and balls before the blowjob? Descriptions of her enjoyment as well as his would have been perfect, particularly if there had been dialog about what she was doing to him. And why didn't she ask him whether he'd masturbated to thoughts of her? How often? What did he fantasize about when he did?
Easitly could have been five stars, but not quite for me.