All Comments on 'Lester's City - Just a Business Meeting'

Personally I found the story line to be a unique contribution, a few short thin spots but then it picked right back up markedly and made me pay attention. I'd enjoy reading more about Lester, his character could be easily expanded due to his career, geographic location and the interesting way you introduced him here.

As a writer you have skills to bring the depth or change the situation quickly while keeping it enjoyable to read. I'll be looking for more from you!

Humbly, thank you.

I am trying to expand Lester's take on the world!

Feel this out and expand it

Very nicely done! I would cast a young James Spader. I could actually hear his voice as I read it.