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prop69almost 7 years agoAWESOME STORY..hope we have another chapter..a little short
I wish I had a sister to offer me that before I went to training camp and that was the same year, the summer of 1968.
What happened when he returned home from Viet Nam?
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoAss
Why are so many authors on Literotica enamored with ass hole sex? As usual, with this story it turned a good story into a piece of crap.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoWhy did you even submit this?
No character development, no foreplay, and no proofreading. I suppose I should be thankful it was only 1 page. What happens next? Mom and dad join in? Spontaneous orgy? Everyone reduced to a combination of holes and fluid. Yawn. Don't bother.
jtw0978almost 7 years agoDude keep writing and add a part 2. Plus forget the haters. And just do you
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