All Comments on 'Let's Play'

It began really nice and has a promise, but didnt deliver.

I figured - a demented wife living in La La land - creepy and might be even sexy.

The it turned out to be one of them somewhat lame punch-line stories - 'and then mom woke me up, thank god it was just a dream.'

Understandable. Thank you very much for your input. The critique is greatly appreciated. Perhaps my next chapter here on Literotica will be more to your and everyone elses' liking. Please check back every so often for updates :)