All Comments on 'Let's Watch a Movie'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
A guy with some limits?!

Finally a story where the guy isn't the one wanting to see his girl screwed by other men and wants to be shown some real respect!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

well written, but what a crap story. I thought this site was for erotica , not juvenile attitudes and betrayal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

The sex and everything was ok. Wasn't to fond of how she acted, considering they had been together for a year.

jackogjackogalmost 12 years ago
go Tonya!

I liked it!!! I'm afraid I would be the Josh in the story but that's my problem. It's nice to hear about the girl being the sexual agressor for a change. Yea for Tonya!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
No resolution

The ending was, she comes back and rubs his face in it all the time?

He needed payback. Burn down the dorm, something, anything. Just sitting there like a wuss doesn't cut it.

renae84renae84almost 12 years ago
wow

Wow amazing story, can totally picture myself being that lucky bitch

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Enjoyed

Liked the story. Wish I was Tonya!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Jesus

and the 'author' thinks this crap is worth entering a competition?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Burn your computer and stop writing

I hate it. Just an absolute bad feeling story. It's a shitty attempt at a nude day story with some latent domination urges or something along the lines of self destructive tendencies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Josh is a bitch

Maybe if he was reluctant at first, but then had the idea of a gang-bang grow on him as he saw Tonya start to suck the other dude off. I think that would have given the story a much better vibe. Instead he just comes off as a possessive bitch.

Good details on the gang bang, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
josh=control freak

josh was a little too protective as for tonya she was a litlle too slutty but he rest of the sory was fine

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Horny

Nothing like a gang bang! All involved know what is expected but are often reluctant to get the ball rolling. A good gang bang needs at least one adventurous girl!

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