All Comments on 'Letter to L: A Massage to Remember'

I don't like to discourage anyone from writing erotica but this author ought to read other submissions and gain an understanding of the effort that goes into making a four or five star submission (or even a three). This didn't make the bar at any level. Please keep trying!

This is a decent story albeit a little unrealistic and I guess "Massage" is code for "Pay for Sex." But Lady_MaDonna, I acknowledge your effort. Thank you

Very hot it gave me an erection

This story has no build up.

Completely rushed.

Plus this is more of a brothel than a massage spa.