by kara24
Being a sub myself I found this story so erotic and so sensual. Congratulations Kara.. Great story well written.
From one sub to another:
Spectacularly written, vivid imagery and sensual, sexy, arousing plot and dialogue. MMMMMMMMM definitely a keeper :D
I truly hope you are rewarded for writing this by living the experiece you describe.
delicious.....what a story!! what a scene!!! excellent and well written...i'd love to see you right something new...soon. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
as was your train ride. Watch for puctuation - your apostrophes do need a little more consistency, young lady. Smiles S.O.
i loved it, made me want to be with my master so bad and be used, got so wet from it