All Comments on 'Letters to Beth Ch. 01'

Best story I've read in a long time! Absolutely perfect.

Murphy

Fantastically horny story! A second part is a MUST!

Very well written and inspiring... Please continue!

Oh Wait ! ! !

I lost it when i saw that! That’s like my favorite catch phrase/greeting/salutation EVER! You know what kind of a chick your dealings with if they say any form of “Suck IT” or “suck my dick”!. Hot, fun ones! Are you a hot and fun one my darling Nikki?

Kick ass story btw. I’m making my way thru your collection now.

I loved it. You're very gifted. I'll enjoy reading more.

You're an absolute hoot. Loved it.😂

Telling the story in epistolary format is so original. I love how sometimes Nikki is a sexual adult, and sometimes she is just mentally a 14 year old girl. Beth eggs her on, which is so cool. And her dad plays a more or less passive role, but the story works because Nikki is so assertive. This is very hot stuff, and very believable. I can't wait to read the other installments.

Brilliant.

wow

im so horny

bloody briiliant

You have the most creative and stimulating imagination! Wow, I love your stories! Never stop?!

Just realised I read this 2 years ago. The great thing about old age is I can't remember a damn thing. Looking forward to chapter. 2 now ha ha.

Father4Star:

Respond to this fucking hot fantasy? Normally it would be dear old dad doing the lust, cunt busting desire for his daughters. I've got two, and they lost theirs before they were10. So yes, this is one hot fantasy and one I'm going to follow all the way through. I can just feel Nikki's mouth wrapped around my cock and wanting more. And as for the struggle of right or wrong, yes it does go on and we fight against it as we want to fuck our little ones no matter what. Once that lust sets in, we pretty much are lost. I'm looking forward to a dad taking Nikki's cherry in the next chapter and I suspect Beth is going to start thinking about her dad too.

Father4Star

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