All Comments on 'Lexi Ch. 01: My MILF Landlord'

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Hughjhard9Hughjhard9over 7 years ago
A very fine beginning...

To an excellent story. Love the Lexi character. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A little rushed in the middle

Don't get me wrong, I gave the story 5 stars, but I think it could've used a full account of the night he "broke" Lexi after meeting her in the club so the change doesn't seem quite so arbitrary. Other than that, and a few odd spelling mistakes/grammatical errors here and there, and it was a great story.

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