All Comments on 'Lexi's Summer Fantasy'

The story flowed beautifully. I loved how relatable the main character was with her shyness/ excitement. I loved the juxtaposition between agressivness and gentleness of the guy and how much you emphasized the importance of consent. Amazing story! Keep up the good work!

Absolutely beautifully written. And SO much better than Fifty Shades.

Would LOVE to read more of your work, and especially about Lexi.

You honestly made me feel as if I know Lexi SO well already.

Supberb erotic.

Not something I am normally in to, but I can't Fucking get enough of this story.

A great read.

Can't wait to see it as a full novel this story is hot !

An interesting first time for a young woman, to say the least. Will she ever go back to plain vanilla sex? Perhaps Chapter 2 will tell us?

Good luck in the contest.

Hey, Maddie here. If you liked this short story, I've worked it into a full-length ebook called "The Millionaire's Shackles," which you can find now on Amazon and Smashwords. Enjoy!

Fuck. Yes! Sooo hot. Got me off and inspired me to write more.