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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice...but a little more risk/danger would spice up the story

Great story! Just a comment though...a little more risk in the story would spice it up. Maybe some roommates come home early? Or you find yourself masturbating in a semi-public place? or on cam? Just some ideas...but a very hot story nevertheless!

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Hey. I am an author from the UK who tries to write multifaceted characters in interesting, and sexy, scenarios. Please comment if you like things so I know how I'm doing. 22/07 Update - Hi all. Been a while. I'm doing well but writing has been a struggle recently. Lots of W...

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