All Comments on 'Lick Me Clean Bitch!'

A nice story and, I think, written from the heart. So are you a dominant, hispanic Female or a submissive, white male?

Thank you. Im glad you liked the story. This was my first story but more will soon follow.

I really liked your story. As a white guy who was a hispanic woman's live-in slave for a while and also was used as her full toilet, that story brought some nice memories back. :)

The only thing which bothered me a bit was that the male main character was a white racist. Therefore I couldn't really empathize with him. Imho it would have been nicer, if he would have been a true white sub, who naturally sees himself under a superior hispanic woman.

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you liked the story, and i'm glad it brought back fond memories for you. I made the story this way in order for the story to have the non consent element, as well as to enhance the humiliation element of the main character. I am also concidering writing a similar story in the femdom category that will probably include the aspects you liked, and not contain the aspects you didn't like sometime in the future.

Oh I don't have a problem with humiliation. Imho it's more important to be able to empathize with a character in the story. As a a male sub, I naturally put myself in the role of the guy being used here. If he becomes a racist guy that becomes really hard.

Maybe the humiliation aspect could come exactly from his natural willingness to submit and serve a woman? Mocking him for letting her walk all over him.

P.S.: A remark to the person down voting this. It's a fictional story written for people into female domination. If you don't like it, just don't read it. Appearing here and making this negative comments is really strange. I hate maledom stories, but you won't see me waste my time reading those stories and composing negatve comments there.

Thank you for this feedback. The feedback is very important to me as this was my first story. Untill you mentioned it, i didn't even consider that the reader needs to empathize with the character. I realize now that i created a character that readers can't empathize with. I will keep this valuable info in mind when writing the next story.

As a profound white submissive (my self-realization was prompted by me feeling an urge to submit to Oprah every time looked at her), I feel that the man in the story was obviously a sub otherwise he couldn't have done what he did, but he didn't have the the honesty to admit it to himself....when I came to terms with my real self I shocked my family by marrying a strongwilled divorced black woman older than my mother, now they all realize Jenna (my ebony queen) is what I truly needed

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story.

I keep coming back to this story over and over, it so awesome. I don't agree with the other commentator, I think the key to this story is that he doesn't "secretly" want it. I hate when stories do that as it ruins the effect for me.

Anyway, I have probably came to this story over 10 times, thank you so much for writing it!

I'm glad you like the story. I'm working on another one that you might enjoy as well.

I loved the femdom and humiliation of him very much, but the being a racist was not as much fun, maybe in another story he could just be an arrogant male chauvinist?

But thanks for a pretty good story.

Loved it man I'm a female who's a female slave and I love the way it's writen

Wish I had such a boss

I love your story. My woman neaver uses toilet paper again just to let you know

Proofreading matters. If you need somebody to proofread your stories in the future, I would be happy to help. "Hispanic's" does not take an apostrophe. "luckey" is not spelled with an "e." You have the word "cubicle" spelled in two different ways in the sentence. I get it. Grammar doesn't have to be perfect. But it shouldn't be this awful, either.

Great story! There have been a lot of discussion about whether it was good or bad that he was a racist.. For me it is exactly these kind of stories I like. When The dom have a "reason" to humiliate its sub it gets more sadistic. I love that you combined piss, feet, shit and fart together with The humiliating factor that they both laughed at him. Looking forward to read more from you!

One of my favourite stories I have ever read! Well done!