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"She is fine," I said as I turned to see her and Mike.
"Have you to had a good time?" I asked.
"Oh yes!" Jill said.
"Mike, did you get a chance to talk to Linda?"
"Yes I did."
"And?"
"She said she looked forward to me working with her company."
"That's it?"
"That's it."
"Good. Are you two splitting up tonight?" I asked.
"We have split up several times today, Keith is joining us tonight," Jill said.
"A three-way with another man, that's a first isn't it?" I asked.
"Yes!" Jill said.
"Enjoy."
"Oh, I will!"
Jill and Mike headed off.
"I have plenty of ice and drinks in the coolers, I have a feeling everyone will be up tonight," Nancy told me.
"Thanks. When the fireworks start, could you turn off the big lanterns up here?"
"Sure."
"Turn them back on when it is over so people can see."
"Okay. James, thanks for letting me join in this weekend."
"Anytime Nancy, and I want you to think about the two us enjoying a weekend together."
"Let's get this show on the road!!" Someone yelled.
"I think everyone is ready for the show," Nancy said.
"Okay then!"
I grabbed one of the big battery operated lanterns that was hanging in the tent, it had gotten dark. I walked between everyone as I made my way to the fireworks. I walked passed Amy and Samantha, they were getting ready to fuck during the show.
"Here we go!!" I yelled. Cheers went up.
I sat on the ground by the electronics and connected the two big clamps to the car battery. I had about 50 buttons to go before the last two. I put my hearing protection on and got started. The sky lit up as I sent shell after shell into the air. The two guys had done a great job of picking different types of fireworks, all different colors and effects. I was getting rocked by some of the larger ones as they shot out of the tubes. About 15 minutes later I had five left before the last two, I set them all off at once.
I took off my hearing protection and heard the unmistakable sound of Amy and Sam having a huge orgasm. I waited a few minutes then turned and flashed the flashlight. Soon, I saw two flashlight beams bouncing my way.
"Ready for us?!" Sam asked.
"Yes, sit down. These last two switches are for you two. Amy you go first when I signal you. Both of you put these on, this is going to be loud."
They slipped on my hearing protection. I pointed at Amy and then jammed my fingers in my ears. She pushed the switch.
BOOM!!!
"FUCK!!!" I yelled out loud as the ground shook. We all looked up and waited.
"Where is it!!?" I heard Amy yell.
BOOM!!!
A gigantic orange star shell went off. It change different colors then a huge silver star lit up the sky and had little explosions of color at the tips of each of the dozens of arms of the silver star.
"Wow!!!" Amy screamed as everything faded out. She and Sam were laughing and screaming.
"Go ahead Sam!!!" I screamed. Sam pushed her button.
BOOM!!!
The ground shook again. We looked up and watched.
BOOM!!! BOOMBOOMBOOMBOOMBOOM!!!
Suddenly, there was a huge star burst then five other large star burst. Amy and Sam were screaming and jumping up and down. As the last sparkle faded, the two of them tackled me to the ground.
"Thank you, thank you, thank you!!" They screamed.
Everyone was clapping and cheering. I hugged the two of them.
"That's all!!!" I yelled to everyone.
"That was great!!" I heard yelled.
"Did you two have a good fuck during the fireworks?"
"Oh god yes!" Amy said.
"I am happy you two enjoyed all of it."
"We did!" Sam said.
"I'm going to get a beer, you two want one?"
"No, we are going up to the house to wash all the cum off of us," Sam told me.
"Don't forget to come back."
Sam and Amy headed off toward the house while I walked to the big tent to join everyone getting a drink. I took my beer and started walking toward the red tent Dawn had instructed me to go to. When I got there, Dawn was waiting outside.
"The fireworks were great honey," Dawn said.
"Amy and Sam sure liked them."
"The two of them were each riding someone while they watched. They got off quite hard while watching."
"I'm glad they had a good time."
"Are you ready for some more excitement?" Dawn asked.
"If I get to spend the night with you?"
"Go on in then."
Dawn opened the tent flap, by the light of the lantern I couldn't believe what I saw; Chris' Jill, Lisa, Stacey, and Liz.
"Hi James!" They all said together. "Come on in!"
I started into the tent and was then pulled in by outstretched hands. I landed on top of Liz.
"Hello James," she said.
- COMMENTS
nativensdabout 4 years agoThoroughly enjoying the 4th of July party and all the sexcapades. I'm so glad you explained in more detail about Dawn and your powers and abilities. I've heard some of that is out there and would love to find out more of what it entails. What Dawn is capable of, along with you and your connection with each other - WOW!!!
That part with you and Dawn making love, so hot and both pushing your powers and feelings into each other, OMG! Can't wait to find out how that continues to play out.
As others have stated, there are a lot of characters in these stories. Would be nice to add in after a few chapters who's who, some description of them and their looks.
But still 5+ stars from me. LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!
ds25946about 5 years agoI find it difficult to keep track of all of the players; men and women! I would like to see at the start of each of the chapters, especially the party chapters, a "Program" listing each player and a brief (one or two sentence) identification of the players included in each chapter. Thanks. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoy your work and look forward with dread to the last chapter!!!
CSharon1over 5 years agoSorry James, I haven't left any comments until now, even though I love your story. I think the problems that you had with people talking is a good share, lets others know its not all strawberries and wine! I can understand that when everyone is in the tents, its hard to get other perspectives on what is currently going on, and I'm of the belief that it will get covered later, as always. I agree with you turning off non-members, since they don't have the balls to leave their names. Good job so far !! I will be sorry when I hit the end, which means I will be reading real time, and have to wait for the next chapter. AGAIN, GREAT JOB.
Just one question, since Literotica allows illustrations, any chance you can do a few?
Anonymousabout 6 years agoWell this part was only about James and all the ladies trying to fuck him and where this story deteriorates and make it as of all the stories going in this site...dawns party was much fun...it sucks just reading about only one person and how great he is...i wont be reading anymore
drmac100over 9 years agoAuthorDear fans and readers,
I have had to turn anonymous feedback off, sorry. But the rules state that I am responsible for moderating comments.
Recently, some stupid, ignorant asshole, with IQ of a fruit fly, has been leaving racist comments on my stories. I don't have time to keep deleting all this garbage from some low life teenager. Of course, the person is doing it as Anonymous, no balls to be a member and use its name.
I'm sorry I had to do this, but I don't want to get kicked off the site because of this stupid cocksucker. I appreciate all the good comments everyone leaves, even the ones bitching about my bad writing. I am slowly working on cleaning up the older stories one chapter at a time, but I can't do them all and keep writing new stuff.
For those that read for the appreciation of the content, I thank you.
If you are not a member, please become one. If you need an anonymous email, set one up on Gmail. Being a member will not get you a bunch of spam or other junk, I have been one for a long time and have never had a problem. Please become a member and join the rest of us in a good time. If you are having to hide your hobby from your SO, make sure you sign out and remove the last login from Gmail.
If you want to leave some feedback and you are not a member, send me an email, I will appreciate it. If you tell me to and tell me which chapter, I will post it to the comments for you. If you are some complete moron and want to send me something shitty, that is okay too. That is what the delete button is for. Oddly though for all the years I have been reading and posting to this website, I have only had this one little piss ant.
To all the members, thank you for the comments and the votes. I enjoy writing this series too much for this stupid motherfucker to get me kicked off the site. I know if a member leaves a message like that, the rest of you will take care of it and the webmaster will probably kick them off. The strange part is that this strange prick kept reading every chapter, I'm sure giving me 1's. Whatever bug got under its shemale parts must be just awful, I hope it gets relief soon!
Again, there is no reason to not be a member, please sign up and enjoy.
I have fun writing all of the adventures and I am sure many of you have fun reading them. I know that my writing has problems, I have some editors I am trying out. But to keep belittling me because of a minor disability with dyslexia is pretty low. To add the N word and racist comments is even lower and just shows us all how pathetic a member you are to the human race.
To whomever it is, your are truly lower than a maggot sucking pond scum off the penis of a snake. I have just one last thing to say to you, you don't bother me, there are always haters, people that can't do something, so you criticize those that can. Life is full of people like you, the rest of us intelligent lifeforms just have to ignore you and go on with our wonderful lives. It is too bad that you will never be anything more than the scum sucking maggot that you are.
You can read my stories and give them all the 1's you want, the rest of my fine readers will make up for your serious mental health problems.
Sorry everybody about the change, but I think you will understand. I hate to cut off all the great feedback I get from the rest of the Anonymous readers, I hope you understand also.
Now I feel better!
drmac100
