by Cromagnonman
P usually don't read the incest stories, but decided to give Cman a try. Glad I did. Great story and ending with a surprise ending.
The phrase "elegance and grace" or a derivative of said phrase was used way too much in the closing of the story. Do not let the subject matter of your work effect the quality of your grammatical composition. In short, purchase a thesaurus and use it frequently.
It had me guessing a bit when he started questioning himself but I think the way you ended the story was great, oh and the description of the sex was good too.... :-D~~~>
Cheers and please keep on writing.