by dercius
I think we all understand what the mother was, is and always will be...Why tell more? Just finish the story...
so I'll let you make a judgement on your own script.
"I'm gonna cum all over you Chinese birthday bitch. Yeah, yeah. Take this, take all of my load." "I'm gonna keep like a third of my sperm to impregnate your mouth and it's still gonna be more than your loser husband ever gave you." "A beautiful curvy MILF like you deserves this amount of cum."
Whaddya think in retrospect? I mean I'm all for encouraging writers so 3*.
Ignore the haters bro, keep doing your thing.
Interesting addition to the series. New POV from your mum's viewpoint was sexy. Looking forward to more new ideas. Keep going!
This one is by far my favorite, though there aren't any bad ones.
5*
Yer Mum was a bleeding whore. A nasty, low life fucking whore. I don't want anything else.