by dercius
The first two paragraphs were enough to send me scrambling for the bathroom.
How old are you? 14? Because you clearly have no idea about sex. Do us a favour, don't write anything more, just end it as it is and go back to your video games.
Hopefully you are not allowed around children.
Are the two idiot pervs over 18, what kind of person thinks this is erotic?
Stop posting this drivel, get some help and then post all of this garbage in about 2 chapters. This was awful. Look at the number of views. NO ONE is reading this trash.
think you can improve the flow for the other "parts" of this arc. Content still sexy as fuck but structure could be much better like some of your earlier parts.
Keep writing!
If only the son could have join in while the mum is totally overwhelmed with desires for more sex.
Love the series. Please do a future chapter on your mum serving and being degraded by some "ang mohs". hope to hear more of her ass to mouth and humiliation stories
Read this chapter if you want a feel of the series. The best fap material on the internet. This writer is just straight up dope