All Comments on 'Life of a Slut Wife and Mum Ch. 17'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Does anyone really read this?

The first two paragraphs were enough to send me scrambling for the bathroom.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 8 years ago
Do you (the author) even read this crap before you post it?

How old are you? 14? Because you clearly have no idea about sex. Do us a favour, don't write anything more, just end it as it is and go back to your video games.

impo_61impo_61over 8 years ago
No comments needed...

No comments needed...1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Only Comment I have is about your (last statement)

Comment: Why?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
you are one sick little nigger.

Hopefully you are not allowed around children.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
this reads like it was written by a teenager for teenagers.

Are the two idiot pervs over 18, what kind of person thinks this is erotic?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh PLEASE! Get an editor.

Stop posting this drivel, get some help and then post all of this garbage in about 2 chapters. This was awful. Look at the number of views. NO ONE is reading this trash.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So does the mom fuck the son?

Does she fuck her son?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not your best effort

think you can improve the flow for the other "parts" of this arc. Content still sexy as fuck but structure could be much better like some of your earlier parts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hope you smooth out the paragraphs for part 2, still a sexy story though.

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love it

If only the son could have join in while the mum is totally overwhelmed with desires for more sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A+

Love the series. Please do a future chapter on your mum serving and being degraded by some "ang mohs". hope to hear more of her ass to mouth and humiliation stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love the series

Wheres the next chapter??????? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Best chapter of my favourite series

Read this chapter if you want a feel of the series. The best fap material on the internet. This writer is just straight up dope

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