All Comments on 'Life on Death Row'

In most states, if you are an accomplise in a crime that causes a death, the the law requires that you take responsibily for that death, just like the triggerman. Even a getawaydrive that never enters the crime sceen is held to the same charge of murder. If a police officer dies while persuing a criminal, that's murder too.

As far as this story goes, it's really quite good if not difficult to handle emotionally at many points. I did, however, skim over a half dozen or so paragraphs. Some of it was a bit too much of the same regrets. Overall, though, very well written and entertaining.

Just a lot of bull, this was a very good read.Maybe just a little long but a big OK.thanks for the read.

Almost a little Faulkneresque. :) This is some damned good writing, and a unique plot in a genre that has few left. Please keep writing!!

Great read.

Such a powerful themes as redemption and love... you got me crying, man.

Thanks!

Excellent story! Very touching and powerful. Almost got teary-eyed in the middle. Emphasis on "almost." Lol

Really liked the story, the beginning was really good, I was really imagining this happening. Loved the sex portion of it too!

I read Incest/Taboo Stories on Literotica quite a lot, always on my Android phone using the Literotica app. I wish the app would get updated to allow comments, I've said it for years, because although you can rate a story you cannot WRITE a comment at all.

Bottom line is I'm a lazy fuck, so if I get on the website version & seek out a story to comment it was no doubt excellent. "Life On Death Row" features writing you don't see in fuck stories hardly ever- real, human emotions that are relatable, setting the stage for a scenerio that makes you feel something aside from a hard dong. The author wrote the Mother's inner monologue so well, I could hear her accent, feel he disappointment, anger & shame and during the carnal act, felt her willingness to surrender. Just really fine writing that I had to put over, it is that good.

Thanks for the great story, All the best...J.Spade

I found the grammar and punctuation of the story to be essential to making the story more visually stimulating as if it was truly penned by an average person. The plot and flow were both smooth in their application. All considered a well crafted work

......or Trevor? Make up your mind.

Aside all that, good story.

I don't usually read incest but this was different. The story tugged at the heart strings. I could understand the mothers desperate feelings that drove her to fulfill her son's carnal needs. It would be a terrible to be in your mid twenties, knowing you were about to die and never having had sex with a woman. A real story of a mothers love.

Well done!!

really enjoyed it.Thanks

Waiting for second part

Very boring

This story line is so different from most incest. I commend you on your imagination! I love incest when a mother really shows how much she loves her son, this story did that. Only criticism is you should proof read to make sure of names, etc. but I loved the theme! Thx

Wow this is a really well written and erotic story. Thanks

Grow story subject. Very well written. Thank you for this story

Anal ruined it. Honestly, if Brits want to write erotica, they should stick the gay stuff they know best.

It's called felony murder and you can be charged for murder just as you have described . At least in the U.S. Even a getaway driver not in the building when the shot was fired could be charged.