by phoenixcinders
I love this chapter and the series as a whole. Hope the next chapter comes soon, I'm anxious to find out if Kyle continues his transformation into a girl. I wonder if Steph will want Kyle for herself once she sees him dressing as a female. Five stars!
Hi I think your style is awesome . The story is opening and going places I like that not just wham bam thank you errr maam ..
Great story, It is a shame that most of these stories end up with the guy being Gay or Transsexual. What's wrong with having the guy enjoy being with the transsexual?
I’m with the second comment. Why can’t he just be a guy with a trans girl? :/
Honestly I've Never read a story on this site that I like more please don't stop this anytime soon
Great series so far. Maybe I'm in the minority, but I like the longer chapters. I get a bit sad everytime I finish a chapter and have to wait for new one, so the more pages I can enjoy, the better.
Your my favorite author on the site so I'm more than a bit biased, however I think that this story is a cut above your usual works I cannot wait to see how the story progresses for both of our awkward couple!
Please continue! This is great,I can't remember the last time I was this into a story
This is absolutely my favourite story of yours please continue this one. I read everything you write but this series is just the best.
This story gets me so hot, and the plot is actually decent, too. Cant wait for more
I really wish a had an Amanda Please write more.
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Maybe seeing Kyle become a sissy will spark a deep lust in Steph. Hope her cock is just as big as Amanda’s.
Here's hoping there's more to your story! Favorite author, favorite story on the site!
Stopped reading in the middles of part two.
What a sick puppy you must be.
It may seem Amanda is trying to feminize Kyle to become a full girl,but to turn him/her into a full blown slut,so she and Steph can share Kylie as a threesome.To me Kylie seems more suited to be a submissive girl than as a guy,since so many Men make fun of Kyle as being a faggot or sissy which he is.
So why not let Amanda and Steph transform him into Kylie full-time,and I am sure if he does become a girl she will be a lot happier and grow to love being a slut for Amanda and Steph,and maybe more girls like Debby so they can all have Lesbian Trans-sex orgies,and Kylie can become the popular cumslut everyone wants to unload their cum into.Here's hoping Kylie realizes who she really is.Great Story.
I really like this author and I wanted to like this story, but Amanda is so mean. I wish I hadn’t read this honestly, I feel like shit. It’s written well, but sissies aren’t my thing so maybe I should have just avoided this story, but what was the difference in Amanda’s sissification vs. all the other bullying? In general I really don’t get how “spirit/mind-broken cocksleeve” is a fetish, it seems so heart-breaking?
As a sissy myself I can honestly say that there are clearly some people out there to kink shame this story. Amanda is not doing anything that a real sissy doesn't want or wouldn't accept...I have a thing for Amanda 🥰 I think those who don't understand this knid of story would do well to educate themselves on sissyfication/humiliation/forced feminization...please keep writing Cinders, I love what you do xx