All Comments on 'Life Sentence Ch. 02'

More? The build up at Chapter one makes this reader at least look for more.....more about the circle, more about the girl's (penny's) further debauchment, and MORE about her healing and relationship with the narrator. This chapter is TOO controlled and quiet and accepting of her situation. A slow seduction is fine, but this situation (her awful torture and debasement) does not deserve a slow. quiet and almost loving introduction, which is what this chapter delivers. The horror of the first chapter is dismissed and too much ignored. A new chapter is necessary to make this the feeling, outstanding story it has potential to be.

Please write more.

It's kind of scaring me that there are 5 more chapters of this.

I plan to keep reading it, but it's definitely not a fappable tale.