All Comments on 'Life with Aunt Jess Pt. 03'

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TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Good story, but ..

Good story, but expected more like the first chapter, as the author already knows. I understand that you can not always write to everyone's liking, but I hoped that this final chapter would be a little longer and would describe more the life together of Chet and Jess.

Anyway, I give you 5 *.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
quod story but

The ending was a bit of a dud.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Ending

Excellent story only one problem the ending I feel was a little bit rushed and too short

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lost the Plot

Really enjoyed chapter one but it degenerated into rubbish after that.

Sad because that story had so much potential that wasn't realized.

The last chapter felt like you really just wanted to bale out as you knew you'd stuffed it up.

But your original story line was great.

Keep it less complicated in the future and you'll do O.K.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Are you gonna continue the story?

You should keep the story going because it's not a good ending

OlebillOlebillover 6 years ago
JUST

Just to many people interfering into the relationship.. Couldn't finish story fucked it upp once again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Went south last pt.

You blew it with the last installment. Had a good thing developing but ruined it with self blowjob and gay friebd.

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Amateur writer, who enjoys also reading other amateur writers. My favorites are incest/taboo. I have written several on mixed subjects. NOTHING IS TOO TABOO TO WRITE. Somebody will read it and if it is well written, they will enjoy it.

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