All Comments on 'Life With "Daddy"'

I liked this a lot :) keep going with it!

very good story. love it

It was very good. Please don't make us wait to long.

beginning to a wonderful series. I can't wait for more.

Thank you so much for all the positive feedback. Daddy is very proud of me :)

I want to mention, since I don't see the credit, that it was edited by Citrus Blosssom. Many thanks to her!!!

It makes it hotter that you include the details of the way the relationship formed. And having him provide the father figure/family she lacked and give her the care and support makes it hotter too. I hope you keep that aspect in as you go on to build their d/s relationship. good stuff! I am hoping like the others this wasn't a stand-alone piece, but a first chapter.

this is freaking hot

Oh how I love an older man. This just made everything much better lol... great short read cant wait to read the next one :-) ...

Great start with building the story up. I feel like from the point he yelled at her about the milk that you just went too fast to finish. Would have liked to seen more detail.....but over all decent story.

sometime i like a story where daddy has a neighbor, friend, brother, uncle who comes over.....not so focused on dad.....little less guilt. the dad is still cute, but i really want to be performing/showing off to my dad how good im am.....at sex.